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7/23/2004 5:14 PM
 

Okay, I get it.  All the mental trauma that Viper's been through suddenly pushed him right off the edge.  He's now progressed from plain stressed to full-blown wigged out, perhaps pushed into a deep dangerous insanity from which he will never escape.  He'll have to be committed to a dark insane asylum out in the foggy ghost-filled woods run by doctors who are crazier than the patients, kept doped into an almost coma-like state where his thoughts are so unpredictable and frightening that they literally eat at his brain, like little brain-eating...brain-eaters.

Meanwhile, back on the long ride, wild partying, lawlessness and sexual escapades keep the others occupied as the endless carefree life on the road goes on.

I like it!!

So...are we still writing or are we through?

-frolix

 

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7/23/2004 11:14 PM
 

That's earwigs, not brain eaters.  Remember the Hitchcock show about earwigs crawling in the guy's ear and eating his brain?  So then the earwigs are eating away and Viper's brain in the dark mental ward with crazy Doctors and demented nurses (I always wanted a demented nurse, like the one on Hee Haw), so now who gets the beauty Jodi and her twin Gin and the sister Histher er Heather?  Somebody has to step up to the plate and become the resident studmuffin.  Does anyone see my hand raised?

Then you said, “Meanwhile, back on the long ride, wild partying, lawlessness and sexual escapades keep the others occupied as the endless carefree life on the road goes on.”

Whadayamean, stop now?  Are you crazy?  With that kind of draw, it would be criminal to stop now.  (two round blue places appear) In the words of that famous General what's-his-name, “I have just begun to debautch.”

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7/24/2004 8:15 AM
 
Okay then, it's settled.  We do what we do best...we write.
 
But here is the quandary: where exactly are we in reality? Or rather the reality that exists only in our story?  Are the bad Indians actually there or were they just a figment of Viper's breakdown?  Since he collapsed while riding it must be before the group was stopped by the Weatherford band.  OR...maybe like the last episode of Dallas, where the entire season was nothing more than Bobby's dream, the entire ride so far could be Viper's imagination!  Maybe there IS no long ride and everybody's back at their hum-drum existences!  Maybe it even goes back to Viper's FIRST bike accident and everything that's happened so far has happened while he was in a coma in the hospital and he doesn't even know Jodi yet and when he wakes up he has this weird kind of amnesia, like in Groundhog Day and for the rest of his life every morning when he wakes up it's with Merritt in the motel room finding the dead body of Courtney!!!
 
Wow, this is way more fun than our story! 
 
(Only kidding of course.)
 
I will leave the progression to the guys, to set the stage about where we are and who's real and who's not.  For me to figure this out would be like trying to put together the pieces of a puzzle, one where there is a different picture on each side and the pieces are from four different sets and some of the pieces are missing.  Or like the surgeon who's doing a heart transplant and his head nurse who he just jilted decides to play a joke on him and when it comes time for the heart-swap she hands him a gorilla heart.  Or like a mechanic trying to put a Volkswagen engine back together using spare riding lawnmower parts because some of the original pieces had been stolen by a homeless man who needed to sell them for food.  Or like the little mama bird with early onset Alzheimer's who's been working so hard building the perfect nest and only needs three more twigs to complete it but she gets lost coming back and instead lands at a completed though deserted squirrel's nest and she goes "What the hell?  Something's not right here."
 
Nope, practice obviously does not make one a gifted simile-ist.
 
-frolix
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7/24/2004 12:04 PM
 

ok, since we really need to get back to the reality of the fiction, go ahead with whatever you were going to post,, I'll get from here to there eventually,, if I can get there from here...or was it get here from there.....whatever.

anyway,,,,, Viper is in fact dreaming,, only thing is he's dreaming about dreaming ( if that makes any sense) You'll see what I'm talking about in my next post........hang in there,, we'll be back on the road and ridin hard in two more posts....

Can't wait to see what “ fun writing” ya got Sudz

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