Every woman in our story is a super good looking, sexy, movie star type.
Actually that's not so. I was clear in stating that MY character, Merritt, was not beautiful, that only her wonderful smile and outgoing nature made her pretty. She does NOT have a “womanly” figure and instead is long-limbed, thin and small-breasted. Evidently it's just my skilled story-telling that has enhanced her in your eyes.
What you gonna do? Huh? Have Sudz stump his little toe?
No...I'm thinking he might stub something a little more sensitive. Don't be impatient, Sudz. That's the great thing about a long story...there's so much time to make a character incredibly happy before you take it all away and ruin their life.
-frolix