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6/24/2004 10:42 PM
 

 Frolix said, “But that's fine...turnabout is fair play.  You think that Sudz failed just that ONE time with Jazz?  Honey, you don't know nothin' yet.”

Okay, so where's the payback?  Oh, payback, where is thy sting?  Come on, gull, bring it on!

What you gonna do? Huh? Have Sudz stump his little toe? 

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6/25/2004 7:16 AM
 

Every woman in our story is a super good looking, sexy, movie star type. 

Actually that's not so.  I was clear in stating that MY character, Merritt, was not beautiful, that only her wonderful smile and outgoing nature made her pretty.  She does NOT have a “womanly” figure and instead is long-limbed, thin and small-breasted.  Evidently it's just my skilled story-telling that has enhanced her in your eyes. 

What you gonna do? Huh? Have Sudz stump his little toe? 

No...I'm thinking he might stub something a little more sensitive.  Don't be impatient, Sudz.  That's the great thing about a long story...there's so much time to make a character incredibly happy before you take it all away and ruin their life.

-frolix

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6/25/2004 7:47 AM
 

Y'all!  This is the BEST story ever!  As much as I enjoyed Murder on Fairhope Pier...this one is so much more fun.  I think it's because we don't actually have to solve a murder and I can instead just make any ole thing happen.  A couple of comments.

What's with Viper running around nude at the KOA?  Good grief, don't you know there are children there?  And dogs?  Nekkid in the water, nekkid on the pier, SQUATTING NEKKID!!! - and walking back to the camp nekkid.  Good grief...along with all his other interests Viper is evidently also a nudist.  I like that.

I was wondering how our good doctor was going to work his way into the group, but of course he too has a Harley.  Pete has a Harley.  I'm sure that Tallulah also has a Harley unless she traded it on her roadster.

Life is good on the long ride.

-frolix

 

 

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6/25/2004 1:09 PM
 

Yeah ! well Viper is after all a snake :eek:

 

So how about my last post for a turn of events and a little intrigue ??  :-P

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6/25/2004 2:48 PM
 

Oh Sudz, those are GREAT posts!  So many possibilities.  AND - an almost-catfight!  I honestly cannot believe that a book publisher has not been reading “The Long Ride” and contacted each and every one of us about representing us in the next great American novel! 

Rowwrrr!

Now, I can't wait until Viper 'splains the ominous goings-on with Mickey.  In the meantime, can things get any worse for Sudz?  The answer is:  Yes!  Yes, they definitely can.  :)

-frolix

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