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6/24/2004 7:53 PM
 

The Nissan roadster wheeled into the parking lot and pulled in front of the restaurant sending a small cloud of dust into the air around it. As Tallulah looked around before getting out she noticed all the motorcycles parked in and around the pool area off to the side of the main office. There were campers and people stirring about as several families came and went riding in every conceivable kind of recreational vehicle. Small children were having a time trying to coax a large playful dog into a pickup truck with a rather large camper trailer behind it.

She pulled the top up on the convertible locked the doors and entered the dimly lit room taking a seat at a booth near the door.

A waitress motioned she would be right there as four bikers walked by giving the woman in the red halter top and cut off shorts the eye as she reached for a menu.

She was used to the attention given by men. Her training as a ballerina assured her she had the looks and moves to draw that attention and she reveled in it. She loved having men follow her moves as she gracefully swayed to and fro when walking.

This was her chance to prove herself. This was her chance to show how much woman she is.

Her thoughts were interrupted by the waitress. “Good morning, madam, I’m Wanda I’ll be your server this morning would you like coffee?”

She looked at the frail young girl. “Probably only sixteen or seventeen at most.” She thought. “Yes, please.”

“Would you like some time with the menu or are you ready now?”

“I think I’m ready. I’d like French toast with maple syrup and peanut butter on the side.”

“Really?” asked the astonished girl.

“Really.” She replied not bothering to glance at the youngster’s face.

“Coming right up. I’ll have your coffee in just a second.” She bounced off toward the small breakfast bar waving to a middle aged man who she seemed to know.

She grabbed the coffee pot and poured the cup bringing it over and placing it on the table just as the door opened and the girl from the gas station entered seeing Tallulah sitting she motioned for Wanda to follow.

Walking to the side entrance she looked around again at Tallulah. “That woman came in the station a while ago asking some questions about some guys she says she saw coming out the marsh. She seemed to think it was very strange they asked when the dumpster would be picked up.”

Two bikers sitting next to the women over heard the comment threw down several dollars and immediately left.

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6/24/2004 11:28 PM
 
 

Sudz came awake slowly. The stress of the night had not yet reinvaded his mind.  Spending the night on a bed of straw with Terri had been a combination of dread and renewal.  He felt as if he had proven himself a man again.  He lay there; eyes still closed and reveled in the assurance that he hadn’t lost it yet.  He enjoyed the warmth of something soft against his eye.

As consciousness crept into his brain, he realized the warm soft something against his eye was not his pillow.  He opened his eyes and found Jazz’s chest staring back at him.  Without moving, he rolled his eyes up and saw that her eyes were closed.  Her breathing was soft and measured and he knew she must be sleeping.  He slowly slid his arm around her and closed his eyes.

Her sleepy voice whispered, “You awake?”

“Mm hmm,” he smiled.

“What got into you this morning?  You were quite a different man.”

“I don’t know.  I guess I’m a morning person.”

“You sure are.”

“I spent the night hiding in the woods, lying on straw.  I took a shower this morning and looked for you.  Somebody told me you were at the hospital with Merritt, so I came to bed.  Then along came this gorgeous woman and crawled in bed with me and well the rest is history.”

“Was she worth the wait?”

“And how.”

She bent her head down and kissed his forehead.  “About last night.  That happens to more men than you think, especially with me.  I guess…” 

“I know what happened and why.  It was me, not you.  A mental thing.  I just needed to relax and stop worrying about living up to some standard a woman like you may be accustomed to.”

“That’s just the thing.  I’m not used to anything.  Believe it or not, my experience is very limited.  People think I’m a party girl, like my friend Merritt.  I guess it’s because of the way I like to flirt.  But men just look and flirt.  The few who do get up the nerve to proposition me always seem to be the type I don’t care for.  So…”

“I guess I’m lucky to be dumb enough to try.”

“I have a question.  Why did you spend the night in the woods?  Are you afraid of the cops?”

“It’s a long story.  Want the short version?”

“Whatever.”

“You know the girl that joined up with us at the same place where we picked up Mickey?”

“Yeah.  Terri.”

“Um hum.  Terri is riding a bike that I customized for her husband back in South Alabama.  He owed me money and I was trying to collect.  I guess I sort of threatened him.  Anyway, he got murdered and his bike disappeared.  I’m a suspect and so is Terri.  I didn’t do it and I don’t think she did either, but we didn’t want to have our licenses run through the computers and get dragged back home to answer more questions so we hid out.”

“She spent the night with you?”

“Don’t make it sound like that.”

“She’s a prostitute you know.  I saw her with an old camper just yesterday morning.  She’s peddling it all over the place.  Probably has some grungy disease.”

“Well it’s a good thing I prefer a well padded lady like you, isn’t it?”

“Do you want us to be together?  Was I just a one morning stand?”

“Lay, honey.  Not stand.”

“I’m a one morning lay then?”

“I certainly hope not.  That would be so unfair to me.”

“Then you have to stay away from that little whore.  You understand?”

“Yes, dear.  Will you please change the subject again?”

 

Dr. James Wyatt rode his Harley into the park at around 8 A.M.  The sun was almost above the trees and the heat was building.  Distant thunder rumbled across the landscape.  Some of the campers were having breakfast while others were on the dock fishing.  He found bikes all over the place, scattered among the RVs and SUVs like litter.  From what he had learned at the ER, the bikers had been harassed by the police.  He could relate.  He had endured his share of police profiling.

He didn’t want anyone to think he was part of this group just because he also rode a bike.  But he had come here anyway.  He wanted to see that Jasmine woman again.  Something about her had captured his imagination.  It was more, he told himself, than her unusually sexy build.  He had seen something in her eyes and in her expression that he hadn’t seen since he left college and entered med school.  Judy Winkler had looked at him that same way.  The look had led to an affair he knew he would never forget.  He would be with Judy now if she had not been about to become tenured as a professor and if her husband had not threatened to ruin her career if she ever saw me again.

It had been a look of hunger, neglect and dark passion.  It was a look that made him want to protect her for the rest of his life and love her the way she was meant to be loved.  He couldn’t let another rare woman like her get away from him.  He had to find her and work his way into her heart the way she had worked her way into his.  He would let nothing stand in the way this time. 

As he cruised at idle speed down the dirt lane, he wondered how he would locate her in this large group.  Would he have to buddy up to some member of this grungy crew and gradually extract information?  Maybe he could just ask one of them “Where is Jasmine or Jazz?”  No, they would probably wonder why he wanted to know and who he was.  Maybe he could pretend he wanted to check on the rape victim.  What was her name?  Merritt.  He could ask for Merritt and when he found her, he would likely find her close friend Jazz with her.  If anyone wanted to know why he wanted to find Merritt, he could simply explain he was the Doctor who treated her all night.  Even her boyfriend, Snow, wouldn’t be jealous of him checking on a patient.

A pair of young women were standing beside the lane, one of them propped against a metallic green bike.  They were sipping coffee from Styrofoam cups and talking.  As he slowly passed the one leaning on the bike watched him intently, obviously trying to determine if she knew him.  The tinted face shield of his helmet kept her from knowing he was looking just as intently as she was.  As he neared, he was startled by the beauty of her face.  It was clean of makeup and perfect in every way.  She could be a poster girl for skin care, he thought.  And he had assumed most of this biker group would be a homely, dirty lot.  He had even had visions of rescuing Jazz from this gutter lifestyle, before she was marred all over with tattoos and body piercing, and taking her home to his bungalow on the river.  But maybe, judging by the pretty and wholesome looking girl by the lane, this wasn’t the type of biker band he had assumed.

He decided to stop and ask this young beauty where to find Merritt.  He applied the brake and put his boot to the soil.  He turned his head toward the two ladies and they watched as he placed his hands on the head piece and slowly revealed his face.  He knew they were waiting to see if his face lived up to the image the bike and his clothes projected.  He recalled the high school yearbook that named him both “Best Looking” and “Most likely to succeed.”  When his chiseled male model face didn’t win the ladies over, he would always rely on his All-Star status in the college football trophy room.

The fresh faced girl leaned and took the few steps toward him to bring them into easy earshot.

“Hi!” he flashed his pearly white smile at her. 

“Hello,” the girl said.  “Something I can help you with?”

“Yes there is,” he let her watch him check her out.  “I could use some directions, if you will.”

“I’ll try,” the girl didn’t smile, but she had a pleasant expression and he took that as a smile of sorts.

“My name is Doctor James Wyatt,” he grinned and waited for her to respond.

She didn’t hesitate.  She said, “Okay,” and waited for him to continue.  He was taken aback.  Usually young women either responded to the title or to the smile.  Her “Okay,” was almost the same as her saying “So what?”

Never one to let a little thing like shyness stand in the way of scoring he said, “And your name is…”

“Not available, stranger,” she quipped.

His smile faded some and his lip quivered.  He wanted to tell her how lucky she was he selected her to stop and talk with and she was about to blow her chances with him, but he decided to give her one more chance.

The other girl stepped forward and stopped beside the one with the smart mouth.  He noticed her for the first time.  She too was very pretty.  She had long black hair and dark smooth skin.  Her clothing had a hint of American Indian, as did her physical features.  She said, “She’s Heather and my name is Nadu.  I’m sorry if we seem a little apprehensive but we are a little skeptical of strangers just now.  It has not been a good night.  What directions can we help you with?” 

He looked at Nadu for a moment, realizing the cause of their behavior.  He said, “I can well understand.  One of your own was attacked last night.  I was the attending Physician at the Emergency Facility.  I though I would ride out this morning and make sure she was okay and see if there was anything further I could do for her.”

Heather spoke then.  Her tone was more kindly.  “She’s being taken care of.  It was very nice of you to come out, however.  Isn’t it a bit unusual for a Doctor to make a house call these days?  And on you own too.”

“That’s the kind of guy I am.  I care about my patients.  Where is her camp?”

Heather spoke again, before Nadu had a chance to.  “It’s here in the park.  Right now she’s getting some much needed rest, with her boyfriend looking after her.”

“Ah, yes.  The lady who came in with her mentioned he was coming to pick them up.  I think her name was Jasmine.  I wonder if she’s up and about.”

“No,” Heather snapped.  “I thought you said you came to check on Merritt.  Is it Merritt you came to see, or Jazz?”

“Heather!” Nadu bumped Heather’s arm with the back of her hand.  “Don’t be so …”

“It’s okay,” Dr. Wyatt said, warming to Nadu.  “I understand.  You really don’t know me.  I don’t blame you for being afraid.  I seem to frighten children sometimes.”

Before Heather could respond to him calling her a child or accusing her of being afraid, Nadu quickly said, “Perhaps if you came back after Merritt has a chance to rest, maybe around noon, we can help you find her.”

“Good idea,” he said.  He put his head gear back on and started the engine.  He turned around and rode away.

Nadu stood looking at Heather, a question in her eyes.  Heather saw the look and said, “He is a pampas ass.  He’s not the least bit interested in Merritt’s condition.  He wants to get his sleazy hands on that milk cow Jazz.”

Heather giggled and covered her mouth with her hand, spilling some of her coffee.  Heather continued, “Little does he know that Miss bubble butt is all snuggled up with Sudz and I know he don’t stand a chance in that race, even if he does think he’s God’s gift to women.  Men!”

Nadu listened and watched Heather’s face.  She said, “Why don’t you just spit it out?  Say what’s on your mind?”

They both laughed.  Heather turned and walked back to her bike.  Nadu followed.  Heather said, “I can’t help it this morning.  I don’t like his type.  And I like Sudz but I don’t stand a chance against that super curvy sex bomb he’s with.”

“I had not idea,” Nadu said.  “You have a thing for Sudz?”

“Funny, isn’t it?” Heather said.  “When I was still in pig tails, Sudz used to come over to our house to visit with my dad.  They were good friends.  I used to dream of growing up and riding off into the sunset with that man.  I think he liked me too.  But I sort of blew it when I told him I was also infatuated with a girlfriend.”

Nadu dropped her mouth open in surprise.  She said, “Well I guess!  What man thinks he can compete with a woman on woman relationship?  Men like Sudz like to pick their battles and that’s one he can’t win.  I can see you and I need to have a long talk.  I think I can help.”

Heather smiled at Nadu to take the sting out of her words and asked, “Who are you?  Dr. Phil?”

 

 

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6/25/2004 12:10 PM
 
Merritt was sleeping; Viper was gone again; Jodi was angry and confused.  The more she thought about Viper and what he'd told her at the pier the more upset she became.  She wanted to talk to Gin and Heather about it but at the same time didn't want them to know.
 
She sat on the top of one of the picnic tables that looked across the pool, drinking a coke, thinking.  She loved Viper with all her heart.  But contrary to what most people thought, she was a strong, independent person and not just Viper's woman.  She believed with all her heart that seven years ago she'd found the man she'd spend the rest of her life with.  The few problems they'd had over the years were minor and though they'd never married they were as devoted to one another as any of their married friends.  But much of the reason for their happiness was her steadfast belief that she knew everything about him; that he would never lie to her nor be unfaithful.
 
She'd seen what a man could do to a woman who wasn't strong.  Her mom and dad had been married for 35 years but it was a union no one would envy.  Her mother was weak-willed and accepting of anything her husband did.  And unfortunately the things he did were neither kind nor loving.  An alcoholic for most of his life he became meaner and more controlling throughout their marriage.  His drinking had cost him a half-dozen jobs over the years and he had used his "problem" as an excuse to lie and run around with other women.  Jodi's mother took whatever he dished out and the three girls watched as she became more and more bitter and disillusioned and their father spiraled downward.
 
Yes, their's had been a completely dysfunctional family and that was the reason the sisters were so close...they were all each other had.  Their weak mother made the girls strong-willed themselves and critical of women who allowed men to rule their lives.  Their unfaithful father likewise left his mark on them and as a result they despised liars and womanizers.
 
In the span of one day Jodi realized that Viper was quite possibly not the man she'd always believed he was.  He denied an affair with Merritt but there was obviously something between them.  He had just admitted to her that he had been part of something that was so terrible Jodi would leave him if she knew.  And because they both knew how important trust was in their relationship, if Viper thought that Jodi would leave him over whatever it was he'd done, the heartbreaking reality was that she probably would.
 
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After a few fitfull hours of sleep Gin decided to go ahead and get up.  Her dreams had been strange and frightening and left her as tired as when she first lay down.
 
She wanted to talk to Preston.  Actually she wanted sex with Preston.  Being around Viper and her sister on this trip was taking a toll on her she hadn't expected.  Although they spent much time together at home, somehow it was different on the road.  Each time they'd get off together they seemed to be in one another's arms or holding hands or sitting so tightly together on a lounge chair they may as well be doing it.
 
Preston always helped.  Between the commiseration they shared with one another and the regular if not mind-blowing sex, they had a relationship that was satisfactory to both of them and she again wished she'd managed to see him before they left.  Though it had been very long time since Gin had slept with anyone other than Preston, that might have to change soon.
 
This trip had certainly been unlike any of the others they'd taken.  The events of the past couple of days had been so unexpected and awful that a blanket of despair and suspicion seemed to hang over their group.  She knew it would get better once they hit the road again.  At least she hoped so.
 
It was at that moment she looked across the road and saw Heather and Nadu being approached by an incredibly handsome man who'd just driven in on a shiny and beautifully-detailed Harley.  He was tall with dark hair and walked with the relaxed confidence of a man who was used to getting everything he wanted.  Who is he?  And what does he want with my sister?  But before Jodi had an opportunity to walk over to find out, he turned and walked back to his Harley, threw a long leg across the seat and was gone.  A tiny wave of disappointment made Gin furrow her lovely eyebrows.  Still...maybe he'd be back.  A barely-noticeable flutter started in her belly and started moving downward.  Then she shut her eyes and began her familiar fantasy about making love to Viper.
 
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Nadu and Heather parted company and said they'd catch up later.  Heather thought about the words Nadu had just spoken: "I think I can help."  Then she laughed out loud at the very idea.
 
Though she was honestly piqued with herself for not taking a chance with Sudz, seeing him with Jazz made her happy in a small, unselfish way.  In all the years she'd known him he'd never had a girlfriend.  She knew he had a crush on her and was amused by it because it was so evident.  Yet he was so reserved about the way he felt she wondered if it was real or just some harmless fantasy he carried around.  Well, he had another fantasy now...one that most of the men riding with them pined for themselves.  Sudz had snatched the prize that everyone had yearned for.  Who'd have thought?
 
Now her thoughts returned to Merritt and the awful thing she'd been through.  It could have happened to any of them...it was just Merritt's bad luck that she was the one that freak chose.  Heather's heart ached knowing the memories she'd be forced to live with forever.  Thank God Snow seemed to be understanding.  So many men would have thought she "asked for it"....that she got exactly what was coming to her.  And really, she wasn't surprised.  She'd always liked Snow.  She knew he had a checkered past what with running drugs and all but he'd really turned himself around in the last couple of years.  It was obvious to everyone that he'd fallen hard for Merritt...and even though Heather didn't know her well, she could understand why.  Merritt was just fun and easy to be around, no pretenses, no games.  She liked that a lot.  She was also very pretty in that understated way that some women have who don't care about flash and phoniness. 
 
Heather remembered the look Merritt gave her back at Bama's as she sat next to her on the picnic table, her fingers against her wrist as she showed her the glass beads.  She didn't know if she was mistaking something in that glance or if indeed it was electric.  Because Heather liked women she was never really certain if she projected her own feelings of desire on others or could accurately gauge any possible reciprocal attraction.  That's why it was difficult for Heather to ever make the first move for fear that she might be wrong.
 
Again she thought of Merritt and Snow, together.  Yes, he was definitely crazy about her.  But Merritt...?  No...she was almost certain that Merritt didn't feel the same way about Snow.  She was nice to him and gave him sincere attention.  But that spark that she could often see between two people who were meant for each other - the spark that was between Jodi and Viper, for instance - it just wasn't there.  Maybe in time it would be...but Heather didn't really think so.  And for some odd reason that made Heather very happy.
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6/25/2004 1:21 PM
 

Jodi had sat on the picnic table staring blankly into the distance for sometime. The unfamiliar feelings of uneasiness sweeping over her in waves she felt sick to her stomach. Cradled inside were feelings she didn’t understand, feelings she wasn’t quite sure how to deal with. What had happened out there to change Viper so drastically in such a short period of time? How could he be involved in something that he couldn’t tell her about? To many questions that she needed answers to weren’t being addressed much less answered.

She looked around and saw Viper standing talking to two men she didn’t recognize. The conversation seemed to be hurried and Viper was slowly shaking his head while looking at the ground. He turned and saw her. Even at the distance she could see the sorrow and disdain in his eyes. He tried to smile but it came out fake like he knew in some way it meant nothing.

Walking to her he reached for her arm but she pulled away. " You have something you want to tell me?" she asked.

He looked deeply into her eyes and sighed. " Yeah! I got something to say but I want you to know before I say anything. I love you."

"I know that but right now it doesn’t help much."

"Jodi." He said taking both her hands into his. " I can’t tell you what happened out there. I can tell you this. Neither I nor anyone who left this camp with me killed Mickey. You understand? None of us killed him."

" No, I don’t understand. What do you mean? He’s not dead?"

"I can’t say anymore than what I’ve told you. All I can say is we didn’t kill him."

"Then what did you do with him?"

"We didn’t do anything with him."

"Viper this isn’t making any sense. First you tell me no one killed him then you tell me no did anything to him and yet he’s gone. What happened to him?"

He looked around for a second and then back to her talking slowly and deliberately he whispered. " I simply can not say. I don’t really know. It’s as if it were a dream. I’m telling you baby, I don’t know what happened."

She looked at him for a long moment. Looked into his eyes and finally understood. He really didn’t know. He was as confused as she. " Where’s Raptor?" she asked.

" I haven’t seem him since I returned. Why?"

"I thought I’d talk to him and see what he can tell me."

"He won’t say anything either. Whatever happened out there happened to us all. None of us can say what it was or what happened."

"Viper, you’re worrying me! What are you talking about?"

He reached and held her tightly to him. " I don’t know what happened. None of us do. I can’t explain it and neither can they."

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6/25/2004 3:50 PM
 
Lucky for Pete he was only a couple of blocks away from his apartment when the sky opened up and began dumping a heavy rain over everything.  It happened so suddenly and with such fury that he thought he might have to find shelter until it let up but he drove on and made it safely home.  He had taken off one side of his patio railing so he could park his bike off the street.  The rain was still blowing so fiercely he didn't take the time to do anything but slam the kickstand down and enter through the sliding glass door.  It was dark in the small, dreary one-bedroom apartment.
 
Trailing water, he crossed the almost-empty living room to the hall closet where he took out a shabby beach towel.  Briskly he rubbed his hair and face first, then hit his shoulders and arms with the now-wet towel.  When he was finished he threw it down on the carpet where he stood and walked to the bedroom.  Only then did he turn on the lights.  The harsh glare from the single bare light in the middle of the room cast a dismal light on the sparsely-furnished bedroom, clothing lying in piles here and there, an empty pizza box in one corner, a phone plugged into the wall but sitting on the floor.  For a moment he just stood there.
 
How had this happened to him?  How could a man who'd worked so hard for so long be reduced to living like this?  He thought of his warm inviting home across town, all the comfortable things they'd collected over the years, the peacefulness that he'd always taken for granted.  Now, at 38 years old, he'd be starting over.
 
Despair came over him in that now-familiar way.  Always a happy guy, Pete struggled with depression for the first time in his life.  He wasn't sure what to do with these feelings of hopelessness.  It was just so...unfair.
 
Looking at the telephone he realized he hadn't yet called the security company to tell them he wasn't coming back.  It was so late now...it would be difficult for them to cover his shift.  Now on top of everything else, guilt lay on him like sweat.  Should he just go on in?  He considered it for a brief moment but knew it wasn't going to happen.
 
Something had to change.  Pete needed some relief, needed something good to happen to him, needed it as much as he needed air to breathe.  If he didn't get a grip on things he was going to end up like Trent who three months after leaving the force stuck his off-duty revolver in his mouth and pulled the trigger.  Except than when Trent did it people mourned and weeped and wondered why.  Nobody would wonder why with Pete.  They'd all just shake their heads as though they expected it.
 
Walking back down the hallway he went to the kitchen and opened the refrigerator.  There was almost nothing inside but beer.  Pete stood staring inside for a long time as though he couldn't even remember why he was there.  Finally though he took out one of the beers and popped the top.  He drank the whole thing down while standing there at the open refrigerator door, the light from the inside the only illumination in the room but for the random bursts of lightning flashing through the sliding glass doors.  When he finished he dropped the empty can on the cheap linoleum floor.
 
Not even bothering to take off his wet clothes, Pete lay down on the sofa he'd taken from the spare room at home.  The rain was pelting down and the wind beat the limbs from the big Bradford Pear tree against the corner of the apartment.
 
Yep.  Something definitely had to change.
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