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7/13/2004 12:44 AM
 
 

The long double line of bikes moved slowly along the narrow dirt road of the park.  Tourists stopped and watched the parade as if they expected it to become a Mardi Gras.  About half way through the procession, a pickup truck broke the pattern of motorcycle after motorcycle.

At the entrance to the park a police car sat with two officers inside.  They watched Viper, alongside Snow cross from the park and onto the paved road of the state highway.  They watched a few more sets of bikes then along came Pete.  One of the officers touched the siren and gave a short blast.  Pete threw up his hand in a farewell to his pals and gave the engine a burst of guttural exhaust sounds. 

Bikes of every description eased past them, ridden by riders of every size and type.  Like all the others who watched, the two policemen felt a twinge of envy.  Like most people, they too would like to wave farewell to responsibility, mortgages, PTA, routines, family, and all the other normal occupations and ride free and unencumbered along the highways that lead to new adventures every day.

When the last of the parade disappeared over the hill in front of the volunteer fire station, the two continued to sit for a moment, each lost in daydreams.  Without words, they knew the other was feeling the wind in his face and watching the road come to meet them and disappear under the front tire of the cycles they rode in their mind’s eye.  One of them silently reached forward and turned the key and the patrol car came to life and they eased onto the road. 

After a few miles, they met a Jaguar coming to meet them.  The fast little sports car zoomed past their car on its way toward the park they had just left.  Inside the car was a handsome young man with an expensive silk shirt, open at the collar and a petite girl with a set of pony tails streaming out behind her.

Dr. Wyatt guided the Jaguar along the dirt street of the park.  He slowed as he past the sites where he remembered several bikers had camped yesterday.  He wondered at first if they had simply moved to another camp site, but soon realized the bikers were all gone.

Terri noticed also that the group had pulled out.  She felt relieved when her emerald green bike came into view, still sitting where she had left it.

Wyatt turned off the path and made a “U” turn on the grass and stopped beside her bike.  She opened her door and started to swing her feet out.  Then she stopped and turned back to Wyatt.  She leaned toward him and they kissed.

She said, “The last 24 hours have been the most exciting of my life, James.”

“Mine too,” he said.  His eyes lingered on hers, drinking in the young girls sparkle.

“You sure you want to follow the gang?  We could stay here for a while and catch up with them later.” She knew the answer even as she spoke.

“We’ll catch up with them now.  You’ve started something in me that has to be satisfied,” he said.

“I know,” she sighed.  “I’ll follow you to your place.  You get some things together and we’ll haul ass.”

“Do you know which way they were going from here?” he asked.

“No, but I’ll ask the Park Ranger.  He’ll likely have heard something.”

She leaped from the car and mounted her bike.  Soon they were off again.  He stopped near the entrance of the park and she stopped behind him.  She got off and went into the Ranger Station.  Moments later she emerged, gave him a thumb up and got astride her machine again.

Sudz and Jazz rode quietly along the Interstate highway with Nadu gliding alongside them.  He was lost in his own world, remembering the night he had just spent with his lover.  He wondered how he could have suddenly gone from having to rely on paid prostitutes to such a fantastic woman like Jazz.  He even wondered how long such luck would hold out.

Jazz held to Sudz from behind him and pressed her cheek against his back, looking across at the pretty Cherokee girl a few feet away.  She let her eyes examine the flawless olive skin and the jet black hair and the way the wind pressed her clothes tightly to her soft body, revealing the gentle curves of her.

She remembered the conversation last night and was still wondering what experiences Nadu had encountered in her life.  Sudz had awakened in her a passion she hadn’t felt in some time.  She wondered why she wasn’t satisfied by it but rather found herself wanting more experiences.  She remembered the smell of Merritt’s hair and the way Merritt used to snuggle with her during their travels together.  She made up her mind to get to know Nadu better, to perhaps find in her the closeness and openness she had felt with Merritt.

Nadu noticed that Jazz was looking her way.  When she looked at them, Jazz would smile a kind of knowing smile that made her feel uncomfortable.  She remembered the noises she had heard far into the night coming from the pop up camper Jazz and Sudz had shared just a few feet from her pup tent.  She wondered if some of Jazz’s loudness was meant for her ears, as much as for Sudz’ ears.  She smiled as she concluded that Jazz wanted her to hear and Jazz probably hoped that she was tortured in an exciting way by the sounds.  She wondered what sort of strange pleasure Jazz was getting from being overheard.

A hundred fifty miles behind Sudz, Jazz and Nadu, Viper steered his bike along the same Interstate.  The rumble of the dozens of bikes behind him was comforting to him.  He was relieved beyond his ability to understand to be away from the park.  He wasn’t sure if he believed anything Nadu had told him about a curse, but he knew he had never been so happy to be away from any place before. 

He wondered what was in Jodi’s head just now.  He knew he had hurt her deeply and regretted that to his bones.  But he also wondered why a fear concealed from her should do as much damage as it had.  He wondered if she would get past it and if so, how long would it take?  He also wondered where Merritt was and if she was okay.  He dared not ask anyone, even Jazz, for fear Jodi would hear that he had inquired about Merritt and go into some sort of jealous rage.

Fifty miles behind the parade of bikes, Dr. Wyatt leisurely packed his bags to make ready for the ride.  He was in no great hurry now.  Terri had told him the group was headed for Cherokee, North Carolina, so he knew he would easily catch up and find them.  He was wondering if he should go at all.  The 24 hours with Terri had been something he knew he wanted to repeat.  To do all those exotic things with a woman with Jazz’s endowments was a magnet he found hard to fight, yet the small girl he now had access to, without having to take a chance on running afoul of the law, was a sure thing he found irresistible.

He picked up a leather belt to roll it and pack it away.  He looked at the length of leather and wondered how well it would serve as an instrument with which to tie Terri to the bed.  She was waiting for him in the den, having herself a beer.  He was seized with a desire to go to her and take her thin little arm and drag her here into the bedroom.  He turned and took a step toward the den, then stopped.  He wondered how Terri would react if he took her forcefully and refused to pay her afterward.  “She a feisty little firecracker,” he thought.  Then, aloud, he said, “No.  I guess I won’t take the chance.”  He turned and pushed the belt into the leather bag.

 

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7/13/2004 10:11 AM
 
Riding in the pickup alone Jodi had too much time to simply think.  She kept analyzing and picking at the situation in her mind and questioning Viper's honesty until she thought she'd go mad.  The CD she'd been listening to started to replay so she fumbled with the case on the seat beside her to get another and was so distracted she almost ran off the road.  Finally in frustration she found a station on the radio and tried to just concentrate on the music.
 
Gin had told her she'd ride in the pickup after their first stop and she looked forward to not only having her sister's input into the situation between she and Viper but also hearing about Pete.  Jodi was extremely surprised that Gin had met someone so quickly and even more so that she'd convinced him to just abandon his life and head out with strangers.  Except for Preston, Gin never dated anyone.
 
Up ahead rode Pete and Gin, appearing as easy and comfortable with one another as if they were an old couple.  Pete felt as though yesterday he was someone completely different from the person he was at this moment.  In fact it wouldn't be far from the truth to say that meeting Gin had probably saved his life.  He had been in a downward spiral with no way up and suddenly anything was possible.  Gin's hands lightly lay on the side of his hips and periodically would rise up the sides of his body, touching him softly as though just that gentle feeling gave her pleasure.  Pete was glad they hadn't made love last night.  The anticipation of that experience before them was exciting and lay like a smoldering fire in his belly.
 
They hadn't been traveling an hour when without warning the traffic became thicker and slower.  As the bikes gathered closer and closer together it became obvious that either there was an accident or roadblock of some kind ahead.  The long stretch of cars before their group finally came to a standstill and around the curve to the right nothing more could be seen.
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7/13/2004 7:05 PM
 
Jeremy judged Merritt correctly.  After driving her to the Memphis Belle Motel and introducing her to Betty at the desk as a good friend of his, he deposited her in a quiet corner room near the back.  Though small, the room was clean and furnished nicely - as motel rooms go - and an inviting kingsize bed filled up one side.
 
"Now Merritt, I'm gonna call you here at, what? Nine o'clock, okay?  And if you've gotten your second wind we'll head down to dad's club and have a couple of drinks, okay?  I really want you to come."  His youthful face was as excited as a child's anticipating a large birthday gift.
 
And after a long soak in the tub Merritt was invigorated enough that she was ready to see Memphis.  It had been a very long time and she'd missed the music, the crowds and the never-ending nights.  She was not only ready at nine o'clock but excited to be going out.
 
When she opened the motel door for Jeremy she couldn't help smiling from ear to ear.  He was a strange though appealing young man.  His dreadlocks now pulled back on his neck with a wildly-colored scrunchee she was able to see a string of piercings up each ear.  His skin was dark and smooth but a large tribal design tattoo could still be seen up high on his shoulder.  He wore no shirt but only a hand-embroidered vest and his narrow hips and legs were covered with faded blue jeans held up with what looked like colored hemp rope with beads on the ends.  He still wore silver rings on every single finger.
 
"Very...nice," Merrit said, smiling broadly.  Merritt loved characters.  What a pair they would make.  She, likely old enough to be his mother, and in direct contradiction to him wearing only a simple light blue tank top and unbelted jeans.  "I hope I'm not...underdressed."
 
"No, not at all.  You look beautiful."  And he meant it...that was what made it so endearing.
 
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The club was small and smokey and filled with mostly young black men and women.  They sat at tiny round tables that faced a raised stage upon which various patrons would share their feelings in prose with attentive audience members.  It was quite entertaining in a bohemian way that appealed to Merritt.
 
During a break Jeremy's cell phone rang and he excused himself to answer it.  Merritt continued talking with one of Jeremy's friends, Nick.  Moments later Jeremy returned and said apologetically "Listen Merritt, I've got to run back to the shop.  Paula can't find the keys to the back room and I've got to give her a spare.  You wanna just stay here?  I won't be but...maybe fifteen minutes."
 
"Sure.  Unless you want me to go with you...?"
 
"No, stay here if you're having fun.  Nick'll take care of you while I'm gone, right bro?"
 
Nick agreed he would and Jeremy patted Merritt on the shoulder like he would a good dog and left.
 
"So Nick, what do you do here in Memphis?" Merritt asked pleasantly.
 
"I'm a research assistant for a law firm."
 
"Really?  That sounds interesting."
 
"Yeah...sometimes.  Sometimes it's just drudge work."  Buoyed by Merritt's interest Nick began talking about what he did and as he spoke Merritt was focused both on what he was saying and what she'd been thinking about all day.
 
"So you know a lot about criminal law, too, huh?"
 
"I guess.  Criminal law is of course less boring than the tax cases."  He chuckled.
 
"Mmmm.  Well, maybe you could give me a little advice then," Merritt asked in a friendly way.
 
"Sure.  Shoot."  Nick was immediately happy to be questioned about his profession by such a pretty, interested woman.
 
"I'm writing a book," she said and nodded as his curiosity piqued.  "It's fiction, and I've run into a legal question that I haven't yet researched."
 
"I see.  Well, tell me about it."  He leaned his elbows on the tiny table and locked his eyes on Merritt's.
 
"Two characters, M...Melissa and uh, Vic, have met again after seven years."  Merritt sat back comfortably and paused while she lit a cigarette.  Inhaling deeply and with great relish, enjoying smoking again, she began to tell the story of Melissa and Vic and what happened years ago when they picked up a young girl.  As she talked, Nick nodded and listened without interruption, enjoying what he thought sounded like quite a good storyline.
 
"Now, before I can go any further I need to know the legal ramifications of what they've done, now that Vic has blabbed to one or more people and their secret will likely be out." 
 
"Mmmm.  Yes."  Nick asked a number of questions about what state her story took place in and other small points she'd neglected to include.  Merritt answered as truthfully as she dared.
 
"I see.  Interesting.  Well, there's no statute of limitations for felonies, at least here in Tennessee and probably all others, too. They could both be guilty of felony murder because the death was caused during the commission of a felony. They could also be charged with conspiracy and statuory rape, depending on the statutory age of minors in Alabama.  So, I feel certain they could be charged.  Now of course, what would happen after that?  So much would depend on the prosecution, actually, lots of different things.  The situation you're describing in your book would be very bad for your couple though because they will be depicted as degenerates, drug users intent on ferreting out innocent, impressionable young women, exposing them to drug purchases - hard drug purchases at that.  Bad stuff.  Think of the jury.  Every jury member who has a daughter would look at Vic and Melissa as monsters preying on young girls for their own sick peversions..."
 
Just then Jeremy walked back, pulled out the chair between Nick and Merritt and sat down. "See, that didn't take long.  The next set hasn't even started."  He looked back and forth between Merritt and Nick, then asked "Did I interrupt something?"
 
"No, of course not," Merritt replied.  "Nick was simply giving me some legal advice."
 
"Yeah, he's good at that all right.  He needs to get his butt in law school, stop wasting his talent as an assistant.  I can see him as a high-powered lawyer, can't you?"  Jeremy smiled at his friend.  And in fact Nick did look the part.  But more importantly to Merritt, he sounded like he knew what he was talking about.  And the fear that had been eating her up since last night began to once again creep over her like a sickness.
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7/13/2004 11:30 PM
 
 

Dr Wyatt made the phone call he had dreaded.  The Chief of staff was no more understanding than a mother lion would understand if a great white hunter asked her to loan him one of her cubs.  But he gave the grumpy old man no choice when he told him he needed a few weeks off to check himself into a rehab unit and “take the cure.”  The older man knew that some doctors, especially those assigned to ER became addicted to speed and other drugs designed to keep one awake for the long torturous shifts.  It was understood that such a stay in a drug rehab facility would never go on his record and ruin his future.  It was a safe lie.

 

Upon hanging up he turned to the task of getting out of the family mansion without being seen by his older sister.  No such luck.  She stepped in the doorway just as he was making a dash for the exit and toward his waiting bike and his waiting girlfriend.

 

Sandra was a bony woman, just over 30, and never married.  She was a motherly type who had long ago assigned herself the task of keeping her little brother on the straight and narrow.

 

“Where are you going?” she asked James.  Her tone was one that told him she wasn’t about to believe anything he might say.

“I’m going on a holiday for a few days of R and R,” he smiled.

“She looks like a holiday sort of girl.  Where are you going?” she repeated the question.

“Gatlinburg.  And she is a holiday girl.”  He smiled, hoping to take the edge off the chilly conversation.

“Why would you want to go to Gatlinburg with a girl my age who’s trying to look 10 years old?” the chill became icy.

“She’s not your age, Sis,” he quipped.  Then he thought of adding, “Nobody is your age.”

“You should stay away from her type, James.  You should control yourself.  Please don’t do this thing.   I know she’s young, just like you like them.  I beg you.”  Her tone suddenly changed to a pitiful plea.

“I don’t want to fight with you, Sandra.  I know what I’m doing.”

She reddened and her voice changed again, this time to anger.  As he pushed past her and started down the wide brick steps, she called after him in a voice that started normal and rose in volume and anger.  “You don’t know, James.  You have no idea what you are doing.  What are you going to do to her?  Like you did to your little sister?  Are you going to hurt her like you did Kate?  You have to get hold of yourself, James.  James, don’t you get on that thing.  James.  James!”

James avoided the puzzled eyes of Terri as he started his bike and roared away from the sidewalk and leaned into the curve of the horseshoe driveway and disappeared behind the grouping of palm trees that surrounded the stately fountain.  Terri rushed to try to catch up with him on her own bike.

As she caught sight of James, she sped up in her quest to catch up.  She wondered what the tall elegantly dressed woman meant when she said “Are you going to hurt her like you did your sister Kate?”  She wondered what James had done.  She began to have second thoughts about capturing the rich and handsome young doctor.  Maybe she should leave him to Jazz and look out for herself.  He could be dangerous.

When the word dangerous entered her mind she was seized with a wave of fear.  She had taught him how to bind a woman and torture her with lovemaking and the threat of physical harm.  Thinking he had been a sheltered man who needed to learn about perversions, she had allowed him to tie her up helpless and had trusted him to follow her directions.  Now she wasn’t sure she had been as safe as she had thought.  She suddenly had a mental picture of her naked lifeless body slumping down and held from falling by the ropes that connected her arms to the hooks in the ceiling of the forest cabin last night.

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7/14/2004 2:28 PM
 
Around midnight Merritt and Jeremy left the club and headed down to Beale Street to check out some bands.  He noticed that she seemed distracted...somehow changed, in the last hour or so.  Thinking she might simply be tired from her earlier trip he asked if she'd like to go back to her room and crash but she said she'd really rather be with him checking out the sights.
 
In a little place called Reno's an outstanding young band played classic blues to a crowd that most certainly exceeded the club's maximum number of occupants deemed safe by the Memphis Fire Department.  Jeremy knew a lot of the people there and they began drinking in earnest after sipping cocktails back at his dad's.  The crowds, the music, the smoke and alcohol made Merritt feel safe and obscure and as time wore on she was able to put Viper and Courtney out of her mind and get lost in the rhythm and noise.  Jeremy was an attentive date and though the music soon became far too loud for talking they were both comfortable together in other ways.
 
Standing against the side wall was a tall man, noticeable because of his bright red hair and full beard.  He'd been wandering Beale Street for a few hours and ended up at Reno's just about the time Merritt and Jeremy walked in.  Because he was alone he could focus his attention not only on the band but the patrons.  And Merritt had caught his eye.
 
He'd first noticed her only because she walked in with a young man dressed in such a way as to call attention to himself.  Red couldn't tell me if he was black or Haitian or Rastafarian but with his long dreadlocks and colorful regalia was difficult to overlook.  He kept his arm around this willowy woman who as the evening wore on became more and more obviously drunk.  Red disliked seeing white women with black men.  It just wasn't appropriate and always made him perceive the female portion of the couple as slutty.  The more he looked at the dark-haired woman the more familiar she seemed but he couldn't decide if he actually knew her from somewhere or if she simply looked like someone else.  A couple of times she glanced at him without recognition but nevertheless Red continued to think that they'd met at some point, somewhere.
 
One of the young men who had come in with the couple broke away to find the bar for a refill and as he did walked directly by Red who put out his arm to stop him.  "Scuse me, buddy."
 
Nick looked at the red-haired man who'd politely stopped him and said "Uh-huh?"
 
"That woman you're with...?"  Red turned his head in Merritt's direction.  "Tall, dark hair?"
 
Nick glanced where Red was looking and said "Yeah?"
 
"I think I might know her.  What's her name?"
 
Nick looked at the man whose inquiry seemed harmless enough but he never liked to be involved in orchestrating pickups - especially those that involved women his friends liked.
 
"I doubt you know her.  She's not from here.  She's from Alabama."  Then Nick continued walking toward the bar, leaving Red staring at Merritt, now trying even harder to place her, certain he knew her somehow from Atmore.  He knew he'd remember in time; he had a knack for faces.
 
In time though Red became frustrated because he kept coming up empty so he started focusing instead on three women who stood in a group near the bar.  These women all had more meat on their bones which Red found a lot more appealing.  One especially kept eyeing him, glancing in his direction, smiling flirtatiously when their eyes caught, then looking away as though daring him to approach.  So finally he did.  She told him her name was Amber but everybody called her Precious.
 
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Jeremy was smitten.  He'd always liked older women.  He'd had a crush on Annie for years and that was the main reason he worked in her cigar shop, just to be around her.  Nothing ever came of it of course; it was just a harmless fantasy that thrilled each of them in a small way.  When Annie's husband died so unexpectedly it broke Jeremy's heart to see Annie so sad and scattered.  And though he only wanted happiness for her and thought that her decision to move closer to her son was a good one, he still knew he'd miss her.  And he did.  It was therefore a joyful gift to have Annie's close friend drop in as she had...like a link to Annie, a way to know her even better.  And what a cute friend she was, too.  Jeremy loved Merritt's little funky haircut, wild and carefree just like she seemed to be.  And how cool that even at her age - which Jeremy assumed was close to the same as Annie's - she had the kind of spirit to just take off for nowhere with a bunch of biker friends and end up by herself in Memphis.  Most women her age that Jeremy knew were mired at home with kids and car pools and knew nothing of the world around them.  What a boring lot.  Not like Merritt who was worldly and cosmopolitan.
 
Of course, the downside was that someone like Merritt would never stay in Memphis long.  It wasn't her home; she had no ties here, especially with Annie gone.  She was just passing through and that made him sad.  Nevertheless, his infatuation with who he perceived her to be made him hope that however long she'd stay, she'd spend the time with him.  She was one cool lady.
 
"So, you wanna head somewhere else or are you happy here?"
 
"Let's wander!" she exclaimed with childlike exuberance.  Then she impetuously hugged him, easily and with fondness.  "I just love this city!"
 
Jeremy pulled her close to him with one arm and together they made their way through the crowd inside to the crowd outside on Beale Street.
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