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7/22/2004 2:26 PM
 

Hay Viper,

She said, “I'm good with whatever you guys want to do...just let me know.”

(covers mouth with hand to hide evil, hissing laugh.)

 

 
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7/22/2004 2:35 PM
 

ok,

do me a favor......... Don't post anything else about the riders until after my next post ........

We'll take it from there........

Later taters

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7/22/2004 10:33 PM
 
Okay, but boy that ain't easy.  We're now doing what we did best in Murder on Fairhope Pier, killing and carnage.  Ride 'em cowboy!
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7/23/2004 1:24 PM
 

Ooooookay, let's see here now.  I think I have your post all figgered out, which isn't easy for an old un soft fist I cated guy like me. 

Viper has a crash, passed out and hit the pavement.  This comes right in the middle of a massacre by outlaw Indians, so the crash is a dream, hallucination, flashback or some such.  But wait, it goes back to the massacre and some of the words tie the wreck and the shootout together, then we return to the wreck scene on the way to the hospital.  I get it!  The massacre didn't happen.  The attack by the Indians, even the post Sudz put in, only took place in Viper's head while injured from the crash.  The crash is real, the murders are not.  Or, is the killing real and the crash is not?  Hmmm.  Either way, poor Viper is in about the same shape as he was at the last scene of Murder On Fairhope Pier, only this time the audience isn't cheering, just weeping.

I gotta tell you, I wrote a scene last night then saw Viper's request to hold back long enough for him to post this scene.  Mine was fun to write, I not nearly to intriguing as Viper's.  Go, boy.

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7/23/2004 2:20 PM
 

WEEEEELLLLLL !!

I HADDA DOO SUMTHIN !
Couldn't have the injuns take the heat so I figgured Viper could pass out at the wheel ( so to speak) much like he did earlier in the story. Only this time he's going thru some sorta mental distress..... Perhaps reliving the cowboy days :gun:

Post your “fun to write” stuff ! Ya got my curiousity up........:rolleyes:

Ya'll know pre- care- e- ous  that snake can be,,,,,,,

Viper...........................< : 

 

 

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