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7/1/2004 12:37 AM
 

Frolix said “Terri has become quite the little monster”

Well you guys killed off Mickey and every good story must have an evil force as well as a good force.  We also need a thread of story line that can follow the group when they go cross country.  What better form of continuity than having the doctor stalk Jazz all the way to California or Canada and have the reader tensely anticipate the moment when he kidnaps her?  Or maybe he'll do it next week.  I may not be able to wait to write a scene with her tied up and naked.  I mean, just look at her for goodness sake.

I'm sorta ready to leave South Carolina.  I want Nadu to lead them through Cherokee North Carolina in the Smokeys and let her drop in for a visit with her people and find out how the heck she can help people that don't seem to need any help.  She must be sooo frustrated by now.  Maybe she should have a talk with Terri and reform her.  Terri could go from hooker to Mother Therasa in two maybe three posts, you know.  It would be like kissing a prince and turning him into a frog. Like pulling up a weed and stirring up the ant hill at the roots. Like leaving a perfectly good tool out in the weather and letting it rust. Like... well, you get the picture.

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7/1/2004 8:39 AM
 

Oh, I agree, Sudz.  Terri has evolved into a most interesting baddie.  Doctor Wyatt is just a dispicable moron though and reinforces exactly what I think about most doctors.  Surely the doctor can't just leave his practice to stalk Jazz, can he?  Oh wait...it's FICTION!!!

I miss Nadu.  And yes, she must be rolling her eyes at our group...she tries to steer them right and durned if they don't go left.  She's got her work cut out for her, that's for sure.

How can we make it so Pete can join us on the ride?  Surely everyone is now frightened by the way Mickey turned out when they invited him along so Pete's inclusion in the ride might be difficult to attain.  I need a common denominator...someone who knows the group and also knows Pete to vouch for his goodness I guess. 

Nadu, come back!!!

-frolix

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7/2/2004 8:22 AM
 

Pidder is a genius!  A GENIUS, I say!  Wow...what an excellent post.  It makes some sense out of several things I had no idea how we were going to pull together and opens up lots of new avenues to explore.  I am beside myself with awe.

Great writing, great thinking, great imagination.

-frolix

 

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7/2/2004 8:42 AM
 

I agree with you.  She's a smart cookie.  She does her research also.  She studies Cherokee history and folklore (much of it available via internet).  It doesn't hurt for us to let our story become somewhat educational as well, does it?  According to Cherokee history, stories handed down carefully from generation to generation, a Cherokee man encountered a rattlesnake and killed it.  The other rattlesnakes had to get revenge, which was the Cherokee custom, so they told the man that he must sacrifice his wife's life or all the rattlesnakes would attack all the Cherokee and the tribes would die.  They even told the man how to go about the sacrifice.  When the wife returned home from her day, the man asked her to get him a goard of fresh water because he was very tired.  She got him some water from the bucket but he insisted she go to the well and draw fresh water.  He knew the black rattlesnake would be waiting for her just outside the door.  She went out the door and the rattlesnake bit her and he held her in his arms while she died.  The snakes vowed to never bite a Cherokee again.  Then the rattlesnakes taught the Cherokee a song of healing, so that if a snake bit a Cherokee by accident, the song would cure him and he would not die.

If you think that's an “interesting” story, you should hear the story of creation as told by Cherokees.  It has been told from long before the white man brought “Christianity” to them, yet there are many parallels and ironies - to many similarities to be mere coincidence.

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7/2/2004 1:47 PM
 

The Long Ride:  Where the women are strong;  the men are good-looking, and the Indians are Talismans.

I LOVE this story!  Wham!  Bam!  Kazooey!!!!

Poor Merritt...just one more damned thing to deal with.

Good job, Viper!

-frolix

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